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Building Community & Learning through COLLABORATION

3/12/2023

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On my first day of teaching, I was given advice by a veteran teacher on his way out the door. “Five rows of six,“ he instructed, “not six rows of five.”

Bob was advising me to keep my students apart, individual, independent, so it would be harder for them to talk to each other and to copy from each other.  Twenty years later, when I was the veteran teacher walking out the door to move to university teaching, I left a classroom that not only was arranged in six rows of five, those rows were arranged in pairs so that each student always had a colleague with whom to confer and work, with easy access to two, three, or four others. I learned to always have a deck of cards ready to fan out for quick small-group selection and movement: "Group by Red cards, Black cards, Hearts, Diamonds, Aces, #’s, Evens, Odds…"
 
Over the years I found the most powerful weapon for teachers at any grade level is collaboration. As teachers we need to keep in mind the ultimate goals of our classes: academic, all students learning, and affective, all students learning to work with others. And the best way to accomplish both is through collaboration and cooperation, students supporting students.

In my middle-school English-Language Arts classroom, students wrote, read, spoke, planned and produced collaboratively. Collaboration, being social, provides motivation and engagement. I found that those students who would not produce work independently, at least did something—and learned something—supported by a partner or group. Learning and knowledge was extended. This strategy is in keeping with Aristotle: “The whole is greater than the sum of its parts.”
ADVANTAGES OF COLLABORATION
Collaborative projects become enhanced and improved with multiple perspectives, and students begin to appreciate and gain respect for those with knowledge, skills, and experiences divergent from theirs as they became interdependent through collaborative projects and common goals. In collaboration, each person’s contribution is crucial as students pool their resources and talents. The math wiz becomes revered in the ELA classroom when a group needs to design charts and maps; artists are fought over in almost every presentation utilizing design; and the musicians are wooed when persuasive writing includes commercials or grammar-rule songs are composed. And all students benefit from a convenient, engaged audience.

Interdependency opens up possibilities of greater productivity, efficiency, and personal academic and affective growth as members of a group learn to collaborate in mutually beneficial ways and students learn the value of diversity and form a classroom community. An added benefit is the reduction of incidents of bullying when students widen their community, and classrooms are no longer divided into “Us” and “Them” as students gain respect for their classmates. Hopefully, that will spread an even wider net of respect and cause students to rethink their world.
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CONSIDERATIONS of COLLABORATION
My students sat in pairs so they would always have a partner with whom to collaborate. Pairs could quickly turn their seats for groups of 4 or divide and move their seat across the aisle for triads. To mix up the partnerships each Monday students in the every other row (mixing it up each week) would move back one seat, giving them a new partner and, as they said, a new perspective of the classroom; students could also move to the right instead. The seats were fanned out as shown so that even the first students in the outside row could see other students instead of looking straight at the front and not feeling part of the community.

At a workshop I was told how much time (I forget the number but it was staggering) over the year that we lose getting students into small groups. For small group work, many times students could choose their own groups. Some times I grouped students homogeneously and gave them slightly different activities or projects based on their skill and knowledge levels, and at times I grouped heterogeneously by abilities and talents. For random selection, I had a deck of playing cards. As students entered the classroom, they choose a card, fanned out in my hands, and I would announce, "All like numbers together," "All like suits together"; "All black cards together," based on the group size for the activity or project. Of course Book Clubs were grouped by book choice selection.

With any group, it is vital to first teach social lessons. Teaching Discussion Strategies is Strategy #10 under my Reading Strategies section.
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COLLABORATION is a twenty-first century business skill. Collaboration reflects real-world businesses and situations where professionals collaborate on presentations, reports, and projects. Many businesses are now organized into teams rather than individual workers in departments; many office buildings—anticipating even more collaboration in the future—are no longer being configured into separate offices or cubicles.

Where is education heading? My fear is that, with the emphasis on testing for individual scores and the continuous collection of individual data, as collaboration in the business world increases, it will decrease in the classroom. As it diminishes in the classroom, so will building classroom and school community, a sense of belonging, and a respect for diversity, reverting to a culture of “us” and “them.” It is imperative that teachers build collaborative communities in their classrooms to make school a safe and supportive place for children and adolescents.

It is also essential that teachers help their students acknowledge that they belong to a group together, that they are part of a “we” or “us,” and that any differences—divergent talents, backgrounds, experiences, and skills—only make us stronger and better as they prepare students for a diverse future world.

"For examples of collaborative interdisciplinary readng-writing-speaking projects, such as The Home Front Fair, "You Were There" Holocaust books, The Cinderella Cultural Project, and more, see Research & Project Strategies in the Strategy Shorts drop-down menu.
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The Steps & Strategies for Teaching a Writing

1/3/2023

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These are the 10 basic steps and strategies I use for teaching any writing. In this blog, I will take writers through a memoir writing as my example.
 
STEP 1 FREEWRTING
As explained in my Writing Strategy #1, FREEWRITING is writing anything that writers think of in response to a prompt. There is no way to freewrite incorrectly. Freewriting can be accomplished  in any format—story, memoir, poem, letter, list, essay, stream of consciousness, fiction, nonfiction, humorous, serious, written in 1st, 2nd, or 3rd person,… . A prompt can be a word, a phrase, a quotation, a picture, an object, or music. The prompt should be as general as possible to allow for individual interpretation and writing on the prompt or leading pathways to tangents.

One way I have found freewriting to be effective is to have writers freewrite for 4-8 minutes to generate ideas about the topic about which they will be writing to engage the writing brain cells and begin the writing process.
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Prompts should be as general as possible to allow for or encourage individual interpretation.
  • For example for a memoir, a phrase prompt could be “Looking Back…,” “something I Remember…,” or “Throughout my childhood,…”
  • A quotation prompt about memories: "Most of my memories are the sound of rain on caravan roofs."—Kelly Macdonald.
  • A topic prompt could be something like “Family Gatherings” which may be interpreted as meals, parties, vacations, or reunions.
  • A picture prompt could be a picture of popular toys of the years of the writers’ childhoods.
  • For a music prompt popular children’s songs could be played.

Writers may share their freewrites or parts of their freewriting which will lead to more ideas for other writers.
 
STEP 2 READING ALOUD a MENTOR TEXT
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Writers read through multiple professional examples. In most cases I select and read aloud the first mentor text as an example of the writing students would be drafting (and as an exemplar of the form).

One mentor text I employ for memoir writing is George Ella Lyon’s poem “Where I'm From.”
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Lyon, George Ella. "Where I'm From." Where I'm From, Where Poems Come From. Spring, TX: Absey & Company, Inc., 1999.
STEP 3 DECONSTRUCTING the MENTOR TEXT
Students are given a copy of the poem and after the teacher reads aloud the poem, students mark the poem with what they notice about the writing (writer’s craft) and the content. Writers can work in pairs or triads, annotating a copy of the poem.

The class members then share what they observed as the teacher marks up a projected copy of the poem which may look like this:
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This activity gives writers ideas and choices of topics to include and writing crafts or literary elements to incorporate.

After the class deconstructs and analyzes the first mentor text, the teacher may add 1-2 other mentor texts so that writers can compare and contrast the examples and determine, name, and list common elements that appear in all examples and note variations that different authors include, depending on teir writing style or their intended audiences.
 
STEP 4 BRAINSTORMING
I give writers a topic sheet to fill in to gather and activate their memories. S they filled in their sheets, I fill in mine on the white board, thinking aloud as I enter memories. Writers can ignore me or look up and acquire some ideas from my brainstorming.
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The forms are from Bridging the Gap: Reading Critically & Writing Meaningfully to Get to the Core.
I tell students that
  • they can fill in the sheet in any order
  • they may not have something to write for each category
  • they can add any time during the unit

We take a break for writers to share some of their jottings with a partner or small group and then add some more as they glean ideas from others’ memories.
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STEP 5 RECONSTRUCTING a Text – Teacher Model
After the class together deconstructs a mentor text and in pairs or small group, a few other examples, the teacher shows student-writers how writers take those elements and techniques from the mentor text and put them together, making it ours (synthesis).
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from Bridging the Gap: Reading Critically & Writing Meaningfully to Get to the Core.
I ask writers to notice and share what I “borrowed” from Ms Lyon as my memoir-writing mentor and also how my writing differs from hers. Even though I employed some topics and ideas from the mentor text, I wrote in my own style.

STEP 6 Showing STUDENT SAMPLES for differentiation
If this is not my first year teaching this unit, I share some student samples from previous classes (with permission and without names). If teachers do not have student samples, Bridging the Gap includes examples from Grades 5 to 9 as well as Teacher Models.

Students will note that some writers follow the mentor texts very closely while others are more creative. There is no “right” way even though teachers will want certain elements to be included as memoir writing, i.e., a reflective ending. However, we don’t want mentor texts to ever stifle creativity and individual voice. Showing a variety of examples also allows for differentiation.

In these examples from Bridging the Gap (and my classroom), we see that Janel followed the mentor text very closely while Doug went in a completely different direction.
STEP 7 DRAFTING
Students now are ready to write a rough draft, consulting their brainstorming for ideas and referring to the mentor texts for content and form and organization.

The most important aspects for successful writing are CHOICE and TIME.
With the multiple mentor texts and examples, students have been given some CHOICE in what and how they write.

It is vital to give TIME in class to write where they have the teacher and their peers for support and assistance. Also classrooms may house additional mentor texts and other supports for writing.
 
STEP 8 REVISION and EDITING Focus Lessons
Revision is the where teachers can teach good writing
I teach one lesson (one element) for each writing domain or trait for each writing as students
  • draft (Ideas),
  • revise multiple times (Organization; 1 Style element)
  • then edit (Conventions)
before writing final publication.

These lessons are taught as writing Workshop Focus Lessons:
  • derived from needs of students
  • simple and direct
  • 10-15 minutes
  • involves a teacher demonstration,
  • a student practice, and
  • an invitation to apply in real situation

See my blog on Gradual Release of Responsibility Lessons and various Strategy Shorts for Reading and Writing.
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I then use those lessons as my basis for assessment of that writing. Teachers can also use this  as a formative assessment of what to teach or re-teach next.
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STEP 9 PEER RESPONSE GROUPS and/or or teacher-student conferring
In groups of 3, authors read and peers respond to each other’s writings in a prescribed manner to help with revision.

The Steps:
1. The Author introduces their writing. *The Author may have something particular they want help with.
2. The Author reads writing—entire piece or portion—to Responders who make notes on their copies (or on a piece of paper, if Author did not bring copies).
3. Each Responder shares:
  • one thing that worked well or that Responder particularly liked
  • one question Responder has or wants to hear more about (elaboration)
  • one suggestion of something to [ARMS]:
    • Add
    • Remove
    • Move
    • Substitute
    • or respond to* author’s request for advice
4. The Author makes notes, thanks Responders, and goes off to revise, taking Responders’ comments into account, free to use or lose.
 
STEP 10 Final revision and editing for PUBLICATION
This is where writers might change their format of their drafts.
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TO RECAP:
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NOTE: Memoir Writing was shown only as an example. These 10 Steps & Strategies can be used, sometimes with some adaptations and modifications, for any writing, such as demonstrated as Writing Strategies #5 and #6 for Informative Writing which incorporates research.
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Memoir: Writing about What Matters

11/27/2022

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We write for many reasons—to entertain, to inform, to persuade, to enlighten, to show what we learned, to find out what we know. But the most important reason our writers can write is to discover who they are and to reflect on the people, places, objects and mementos, and events that made them the persons they are and the adults they will become. In other words, memoir writing. As writers learn about themselves while “researching” and writing their memoirs, memoir writing becomes inquiry. And memoir writing becomes a journey of self-discovery.
 
Why Teach Memoir Writing?
  • Writers become better writers by writing. Memoir entices students, especially reluctant writers, to write. All children, most especially adolescents, like to write about themselves.  Through memoir writing, writers can learn strategies and skills that will transfer to all types of writing.
  • Memoir writing leads to more meaningful writing. Teachers need to coach developing writers to discover and craft their personal stories to impart the joy and power of writing. Quality of writing improves when writers write about what they know, what they have experienced. Memoir writing, specifically, induces students to write more, write better, and write more willingly and meaningfully.
  • Affectively, memoir writing compels writers to reflect. The difference between memoir and autobiography is that memoir includes reflection. I tell my writers that the “R” in memoir stands for reflection.  In short, memoir = memories + reflection.
  • Reflection induces writers to think about the story behind the story and possibly the story that will come after the story. That deliberation causes the writer to ask critical questions. What did this small moment mean to my life? How did this event, person, place, or memento influence or change me? How did it contribute to the person I am today and the adult I will become?
  • Academically, memoir provides a bridge between narrative and informative writing. Memoir, which is essentially narrative nonfiction, is that perfect connection between the two modes. As writers search for information from their pasts, they are employing experiential knowledge as the basis for their “research.” Many times writers see no connection between narrative and informative writing. They are frequently taught in entirely different manners, and writers tend to lose their voices as they make the change.
  • Through writing memoir, writers also discover and uncover their own passions and convictions, leading them to choose more effective topics for argument writing. In this way, memoir writing can inspire, or lead to, ideas and, again, voice in opinion and argument writing.
    • Note: And also in this way, memoir writing can be employed in college application writing.
  • Most importantly, memoir bridges the achievement gap. Research supports the fact that prior knowledge is a major determinant of academic achievement. Memoir is one area in which all students come to the table with the necessary background knowledge—their experiences. Memoir writing values these experiences and levels the playing field as all children—economically, culturally, and academically diverse—inherently have the essential “material” necessary to achieve memoir writing. Not all students have the prior knowledge, skill, or motivation to write to prompts on standardized tests, but once writers learn to write meaningfully on topics that matter, they can transfer those skills to other topics, even to “on-demand” writing tasks.
  • Last, adolescents are natural storytellers. Ask a group of teens why they missed an assignment or broke a rule, and the most incredible, implausible stories will emerge. Getting them to write those stories leads to more proficient writing and becoming storytellers, a skill that will help them in any future profession.
 
How to Teach Memoir Writing: Using Mentor Texts
Like any writing, memoir writing is taught by first reading mentor texts. Memoir as a literary genre is experiencing great popularity, and memoirs are available in diverse reading levels and genres and on a wide variety of topics. There are memoir picture books, such as those written and illustrated by Patricia Polocco. There are memoir poems. i.e.,  George Ella Lyons “Where I Am From” which has developed into a genre of its own; Dolly Parton’s lyrics for “Coat of Many Colors” became a picture book (Parton, 1996); Cynthia Rylant’s free verse poetry collection about her home in Beaver, West Virginia, collected in Waiting to Waltz (2001). Graphic memoirs, such as Persepolis (Satrapi, 2004) or El Deafo (Bell, 2014), have become popular with many readers and writers. There are prose memoirs in essay length and novel length. And there are oral memoirs and video memoirs.
 
Student writers read a memoir and analyze what the author wrote and how the author wrote, deconstructing those texts to discover how authors develop their writings. After the teacher demonstrates how to take those deconstructed elements and reconstruct them into a memoir, the students are ready to brainstorm their own topics and draft.
 
I like to begin with an oral text, such as the Jerry Seinfeld’s “Halloween,” the story of Seinfeld’s childhood Halloween experiences and costumes. As the students listen to this memoir from the CD included in Seinfeld’s picture book Halloween (2008) or watch the story unfold on YouTube, they jot down the elements they notice, such as dialogue, narration, specific details, description, names and other proper nouns, humor, point of view, topics, humor, onomatopoeia, similes, reflection.
 
After the class creates an anchor chart of elements effective for memoirs, students read a short written text to deconstruct. For example, looking at the first few lines of George Ella Lyon’s poem “Where I’m From” (1999), students are asked to note what they notice about what and how the memoirist writes.
 
Charlie starts. “I notice smells, ‘Clorox and carbon-tetrachloride.’ I am not sure what carbon-tetrachloride is, but I am picturing a chemical smell.”  We look it up and find out that carbon-tetrachloride was used in dry-cleaning establishments. A biography of Ms. Lyon reveals that her father worked as a dry cleaner, and students infer that either her father came home from work smelling of the chemical or she visited him at his business. Either way, that smell takes her back to her childhood. Another student chimes in, “Clothespins, Clorox, and carbon-tetrachoride are sort of like alliteration—almost the same beginning sound.”
 
We talk about what activity the Dutch elm’s “long-gone limbs” suggests and infer that as a child, the author liked to climb that tree. Students observe that people’s names are included in the memoir, and a student says “Imogene and Alafair sound a little old-fashioned, so they could be parents or grandparents,” and others notice the family sayings, such as “Perk up.” We then share maxims from our own families.
 
How to Teach Memoir Writing: Brainstorming and Drafting
After noting that “Where I’m From” was created from a variety of childhood topics, such as people, places, events, activities, environment, religion, family sayings and stories, and foods, we all brainstorm topics from our childhoods, collecting them on a Memories Chart [see below] to help elicit ideas for writing.
 
Using a projector I fill in my chart, relating a 1-minute story about each entry, as students fill in their charts. Some students glance up at my chart and listen as they become stuck; others stay focused on their own charts and tune me out. My demonstration is for those who need it. I clarify that not all the categories will have entries, and they need not fill in topics in any order. Over the next days as we read more mentor texts and share more personal stories, writers can add topics to their charts (Roessing, 141-142), gathering ideas for the memoirs they will write.
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As the next step I composes a short memoir employing some of the same elements and techniques that we have noticed in our two mentor texts. Since at this point we have only heard Jerry Seinfeld’s monologue and read George Ella Lyon’s memoir, I draft my memoir, following much of the poet’s structure and employing many of her techniques, adding a few elements from our analysis of “Halloween.”
 
I am from King-on-the-Mountain,
Hide & Seek, Statues, and Tag,
Calling out “I’m It” or “I win!”  
And splish-splash-ing in puddles on rainy days.
 
I am from maples trees and weeping willows,
Big back yards, each with a swing set and sandbox,
Playing in portable pools on sunny days and
Putting pennies in the patio cement as we build our porch.…

 
Students then analyze my memoir, noticing how it employs topics, literary elements, and some writer's crafts from the mentor texts but also how it differs to reflect my  memories and writing style.
 
Over the next few days I introduce the students to other memoir mentor texts while they read full-length self-selected memoirs* either independently or in book clubs, add topics to their lists, expand the class anchor charts, and draft short memoirs in a variety of formats—prose, different styles of poetry, and graphic—shadowing the exemplars read.
 
After students have sufficient ideas and content and they are ready to choose the topic(s), types, and formats for one of their memoir drats to take to the publishing stage (or more in a longer unit), they revise based on daily revision mini-lessons on the traits—organization, word choice, voice, sentence fluency, and finally edit based on convention lessons taught in class.
 
An important focus lesson we will cover is the reflection that generally comes at the end of a memoir. We again look at mentor texts. We examine the ending of “Where I’m From” as well as endings to prose memoirs, such as Cynthia Rylant’s When I Was Young in the Mountains (1993).
When I was young in the mountains, I never wanted to go to the ocean, and I never wanted to go to the desert. I never wanted to go anywhere else in the world, for I was in the mountains. And that was always enough. (last page)
 
One student combines our lessons in her final memoir (Roessing, 2014, p. 77-78):
"Where I Am From" by Janel (based on G.E. Lyon’s poem “Where I’m From”)
 
I am from bar-b-que,
From corn-on-the-cob and mac-and-cheese.
I am from mowed grass and tall trees.
I am from the never-finished playground
That has no swing or benches
As if time stood still before my eyes.
 
I am from teachers and scientists,
From Mandela and Martin Luther King.
I’m from “Don’t do drugs”
And “Stay in school.”
From "Respect" and "Be tactful."
I’m from “Thank you, Jesus”
From children’s church
And the gospel songs
I’ve heard many time before.
 
I’m from word games and puzzles,
Road trips and airplane rides.
But also from drive-by shootings
And trying to stay alive.
 
In my room are boxes
Toppling over with old pictures -
A time when I lived
With no cares at all,
A time that I will never forget
And never want to erase.


While this writer followed Lyon's format somewhat closely, others had the confidence to move in divergent directions. More teacher models student examples (along with lessons) can be viewed in Bridging the Gap: Reading Critically & Writing Meaningfully to Get to the Core.

Conclusion
I have not included much about the drafting phase because the memoirs almost write themselves. If teachers help adolescents to think back and remember and reflect on their pasts through reading the memoirs of others and sharing their childhood stories within the classroom writing community, after analyzing texts and brainstorming, stories pour out. I am always amazed that this is one unit for which all my students have written and all have done their best writing of the year. Students have written about persons, places, mementoes, events, crises, and discovered photographs. Writers have published their memoirs as rhyming poems, free-verse poetry, limericks, sonnets, prose narratives, plays, and graphics. They have shared unbelievably personal stories, such as “The Day Daddy Left,” and humorous stories, such as “Beastie.”
 
But most importantly, adolescent writers have perceived themselves as authors as they wrote with voice, cared about their writing, and discovered meaning in their lives as they learned about themselves, writing what matters.
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*Memoir Reading while Memoir Writing
How is memoir writing supported by memoir reading? Reading memoirs provides mentor texts for writing memoirs. As readers read about people, places, objects, and events which are meaningful to published memoirists, they can notice and note how the memoirists write about these topics, using authors as mentors for their writings.

Memoirs appeal to all readers because they are available at all reading levels and lengths; on all topics from dancing to sports to survival and resilience; in many formats, including prose, free verse, graphic, multi-formatted, and even as rhyming poems. Memoirs are written in first and third person, and can be humorous, poignant, and enlightening. Readers can together read whole-class memoirs, participate in memoir book clubs or memoir essay clubs, and read self-selected memoirs individually. In addition to memoirs, there are novels, such as Front Desk, that closely follow the author’s life, and there are biographies written in the style of memoir in that they focus on a particular part of a person’s life or particular events based around a theme and emphasize personal experience, thoughts, feelings, reactions, and reflections rather than facts.
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Picture Book Memoirs: Bigmama’s; Patricia Polacco’s memoirs; When I Was Young in the Mountains ES/MG Memoirs: A Summer Life; Marshfield Dreams; The Boy Who Failed Show and Tell; The Boy Who Failed Dodgeball; Guts; Smile; A Long Way Gone: Memoirs of a Boy Soldier; Chinese Cinderella; Free Lunch; We Beat the Streets; Stop Pretending: What Happened When My Big Sister Went Crazy; My Thirteenth Winter; Soul Surfer; When I Was Puerto Rican; Brown Girl Dreaming; Enchanted Air; I Am Malala; Guts; My Life in Dog Years; Big Apple Diaries; Kaffir Boy; They Called Us Enemy YA Memoirs: My Family Divided; The Pact; Positive; Taking Flight; Hey, Kiddo; Shout; Soaring Earth; How I Discovered Poetry; Honor Girl; Sylvie; The Glass Castle; Ordinary Hazards Memoir Collections: Been There, Done That; Going Where I’m Coming From; Open Mic; You Too?; Hope Nation; When I Was Your Age; Parkland Speaks; With Their Eyes: September 11th—The View from a High School at Ground Zero Memoir-type Biographies: Above the Rim; The Lightning Dreamer; Audacity; Loving vs Virginia; Becoming Muhammad Ali; X; The Last Cherry Blossom; Feed Your Mind
References
Bell, C. (2014). El Deafo. New York: Harry N. Abrams.
Lyon, G.E. (1999) Where I’m from. Where I’m from: Where poems come from. Spring,
            TX: Absey & Company.
Moore, J. (2014). Where I am from. As in Roessing, L. Bridging the gap: Reading
            critically and writing meaningfully to get to the core
. Lanham, MD: Rowman &
            Littlefield Publishers.
Parton, D (1996). Coat of Many Colors. New York: HarperCollins.
Roessing, L. (2014). Bridging the gap: Reading critically and writing meaningfully to get
            to the core. Lanham, MD: Rowman & Littlefield Publishers.
Rylant, C. (2001). Waiting to waltz. New York, NY: Atheneum/Richard Jackson Books.
Satrapi, Marjane. (2004). Persepolis: The story of a childhood. New York, NY:
            Pantheon.
Seinfeld, J. (2008). Halloween. New York, NY: Little, Brown Books for Young Readers.
 
The ideas and examples for this article were based on Bridging the Gap: Reading Critically and Writing Meaningfully to Get to the Core.
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THE 5 STEPS of FACILITATING BOOK CLUBS

10/27/2022

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In a gradual-release-of-responsibility model of teaching reading, this would be about the time of the school year that teachers are moving from whole-class short stories (to teach or review reading strategies, literary elements, and author’s craft [see Reading Strategy #­­6]) and whole-class novel(s) [see Reading Strategy #9] to reading in BOOK CLUBS in the move toward independent reading [see “Losing the Fear of Sharing Control”].
 
I have facilitated BOOK CLUBS in Grade 3 though university classes in English-Language Arts and content area classes. I have written extensively about the benefits of reading in BOOK CLUBS. And I have written about holding TEXT CLUBS to read poetry, short stories, folktales, nonfiction books, articles, and textbook chapters in collaborative small groups. For strategies, lessons, assessments, models, and reproducible forms, see TALKING TEXTS: A Teacher’s Guide to Book Clubs across the Curriculum.
These are my 5 basic steps for facilitating any type of BOOK CLUB (or TEXT CLUB).

1. SETTING UP BOOK CLUBS
  1. Choose novels for Book Clubs [see link to blog] by a common topic, author, theme, genre, form. When Book Clubs have a commonality, readers can also meet in Inter-Book Club groups to compare and contrast their novels, meeting even more standards.
  2. Presenting the Book/Text Choices:
  • Book Talk: The teacher presents a brief 3-4 minute Book Talk [see Reading Strategy #4] of each of the choices.
  • Book Pass: A book is put on each student’s desk; a different book choice is placed on 4-5 contiguous desks, then repeated around the room (so students can peruse a different book each pass). Students are given directions to look at the front cover, read the back cover, and read 1-2 pages to determine if they like the author’s writing and if the book is challenging enough, too challenging, or “just right.” After 2-3 minutes the students pass to the next student.
  • Students write down their 1st, 2nd, and 3rd choices. Book Club membership is based on student choice (and any other variables the teacher needs to keep in mind, such as students who do or don’t work well together).
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2. TEACHING SOCIAL/DISCUSSION SKILLS
  • Teacher presents a lesson on what a successful discussion looks like/sounds like.
  • Teacher presents Focus Lessons on Discussion Strategies [see Reading Strategy #10], techniques for extending a conversation and for respectfully disagreeing while supporting comments with text evidence
  • Teacher presents a lesson on creating effective Discussion Questions for Book Club meetings.
  • Teacher presents a lesson on reader response strategies and the importance for Club members to use their reader response journals to aid meeting discussions. Reader Response journals are also collected for a grade—or reading points.
3. TEACHING BOOK CLUB PROCEDURES
  • Planning Book Club Reading: Students are given the meetings dates (2-3 times per week) and the ending date, and Clubs plan their reading schedule. Some Clubs divide the novels by the number of meetings; some like to read more over the weekend while others would rather read less as they get used to the novel and then more for each meeting. Five meetings is generally enough for a novel; readers need a big enough "chunk" to hold a discussion.
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  • Students are to prepare for meetings by reading, jotting responses to the text read, and preparing a discussion question.

  • Reading the Book Club novel: This can be accomplished as a mixture of in- class reading on Reading Workshop days and reading as homework at night or in study hall. Generally, my students had time to read after the meetings (see Time Chart above), and we held Writing Workshop the in-between days; they read at home on those days. If teachers have classes who will or can not read at home, days in-between Book Club meetings can be used for in-class reading, and meetings can be held twice a week rather than every other day.
  • Reflecting on Reading: Students write 5-minute Reader Response journalings, as or after they read each section, to aid meeting discussions .
  • Creating Discussion Questions: Each Book Club member creates and brings one discussion question to each meeting.
  • Discussions: I kept discussions to 20 minutes. It is better that they run out of time than run out of conversation. Teachers should explain their general expectations for the meetings while keeping them student run.
  • Reflecting on meetings & discussions: At the end of each meeting, as an Exit Slip, members individually evaluate themselves and their Club on their discussions—product (content) and process (eye contact, taking turns, piggybacking ideas, etc.) See Talking Texts for student samples and reproducible forms.
  • Presenting novel to classmates: After reading and holding a final meeting, each Book Club prepares an After-Reading Presentation to their classmates; the teacher discusses the rubric, common to all presentation formats, and ideas for choices.
4. FACILITATING BOOK CLUB MEETINGS
This is one class sample directions
; the day's Focus Lesson centered on character traits)
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5. ASSESSMENT
a. READING: I assessed reading based on their Reader Response journals which they used for their discussions (see TALKING TEXTS and THE WRITE TO READ for my lessons and reproducible forms).
b. MEETINGS: I assessed meetings by observations and by student self-assessments
c. PRESENTATIONS:
     My GUIDELINES:
  • Book Club members should demonstrate that they have read and thought about the entire book and how it would most effectively be presented.
  • Include all major characters, setting, and plot elements: inciting incident, conflict, climax, resolution.
  • All Book Club members must have an active part in the presentation.
  • Presentation should be about 8-10 minutes.
  • Presentation must be practiced.
  • Introduce the presentation with the title, author(s), and genre.
  • Conclude your presentation with a short review, including author’s writing craft; for which readers this would be a good match; etc.
  • After the conclusion, tell the audience what your club members learned from your novel.
  • Reminder: your audience has not read the novel.
    My PRESENTATION RUBRIC (sample):
    A percentage of the grade was based on the content of the group presentation and a percentage was based on individual speaking points.
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My typical BOOK CLUB Schedule, a sample:
WEEK 1--
Monday: discuss Book Club expectations, Social Skills Focus Lesson, Book Talks and Book Passes
Tuesday: Discussion Lesson (Strategy #10); distribute novels; Book Cubs meet to plan reading
Wednesday: Creating Discussion Questions Lesson; Reading Time
Thursday: Lesson on Book Club Procedures; Reading Time
Friday: review Discussion or Social Skills Focus Lesson; Book Club Meeting #1
WEEK 2--
Monday: Literary Focus Lesson; Reading Time
Tuesday: Literary Focus Lesson; Book Club Meeting #2
Wednesday: Literary Focus Lesson; Reading Time
Thursday: Literary Focus Lesson; Reading Time
Friday: Literary Focus Lesson; Book Club Meeting #3
WEEK 3--
Monday: Literary Focus Lesson; Reading Time
Tuesday: Book Club Meeting #4 and Reading Time
Wednesday: Literary Focus Lesson; Reading Time
Thursday: Book Club Meeting #5
Friday: Lesson on Presentation Choices and Expectations; Public Speaking Lesson
WEEK 4--
Monday and Tuesday: Book Clubs works on Presentations
Wednesday; Class Presentations

And strategies for LIBRARIANS who wish to start or work with Book Clubs:
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THE BENEFITS OF AFTER-READING RESPONSE

10/13/2022

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In my last blog, “The Importance of Reader Response,” I explain the value of READER RESPONSE and how response compels readers to interact with the text and makes visible for readers and their teachers the depth (and type) of text comprehension. I share strategies, activities, teacher models, and student examples for a variety of types of before and during-reading response. This blog will focus on the importance of AFTER-READING RESPONSE in all content areas.
 
I cannot overstate the importance and advantages of returning to the text for synthesis. In synthesis, learners put together assorted parts to create a new whole, expanding understanding.I find that every time I reread a text, I create expanded, enhanced, and even more innovative interpretations, making the text more interesting and learning more from the text.  Students notice this also and tell me, “I learned more this time” or “I never noticed that.”  But how can we encourage students to return to the text—connecting the parts and responding to the writing as a whole—to construct or develop new ideas. 
 
When I finish a book, I may not build a project out of materials, but I do create a way to understand what I have read and the meaning of my understanding in my mind. As reflective reader I consider, or even discuss with others, my reading and the significance of what the author has said.  I mull over the text, compare notes with other readers, and mentally contrast the text with other texts, either written by the same author or other writers.  Sometimes I even compare the book with a movie based on the book.  And that is what we need to do as teachers; we need to train our students to return to texts to question, interpret, compare, and analyze.  If this process starts in school, it becomes internalized as students become better, highly- skilled readers. (The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension)
 
I will describe different types of after-reading activities that not only promote synthesis of texts read, but share meaning created and, in the case of book club and individual reading, share texts with others.
 
BOOK REVIEWS
 
One of the most effective ways to teach readers to analyze books read (and teach critical thinking and argument writing) is through student Book Reviews which can be collected in a binder or on a website for access to other readers who are looking for reading ideas.
 
I scaffolded Book Review writing through the year: Each marking period my readers were required to write a formal BOOK REVIEW (meeting multiple reading and argument writing standards).

MARKING PERIOD 1: The CLASS first analyzed 3 published book reviews (NY Times, local paper, and from old copies of NCTE's Voices from the Middle) as mentor texts, deconstructing and noting elements that were included in ALL reviews and elements included in only SOME reviews. The "All" became required elements for their reviews; the "Some" were optional. I required a certain number of "optional" elements, differentiating for different students.
The class then wrote a review together, critiquing our whole-class novel. Students brainstormed ideas together, collaborated on appropriate language, and then readers wrote individual reviews (or in pairs), using as much from the class discussions as they wished.

MARKING PERIOD 2:  Book Club members collaborated on a Book Review, critiquing their Book Club novel, each member analyzing a different literary element.

MARKING PERIODS 3 and 4: Readers Individually choose 1 of their self-selected, independently-read texts to review. Reviews were typed and illustrated, usually with a picture of the cover, and housed in the Roessing Readers' Reviews binder which was divided by genre (as was our classroom library) for readers to peruse when looking for a next book to read.
√These also could be uploaded to a class, teacher, or library computer as a digital binder.

Pictured are my GUIDELINES FOR REVIEWS and a student Book Review from The Write to Read. See The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension and Talking Texts: A Teachers' Guide to Book Clubs across the Curriculum for more student samples and other ways readers shared their readings, individually and collaboratively.
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TEXT REFORMULATIONS
I have found the best way to encourage students to return to the text is to ask them, as their after-reading response, to turn the text into a different format (reformulation), which can be applied to whole-class, small-group, or individual, self-selected readings. Each rereading of a text gives readers a greater and deeper understanding, making them better readers and increasing comprehension.  Texts reformulations can be created and presented individually or in groups. And text reformulations can encourage the engagement of multiple intelligences: linguistic, mathematical, musical, spatial, kinesthetic, interpersonal, intrapersonal, and environmental.
 
1. RAPPING A TEXT
Students read, performed, and discussed a Shakespearean play. After, they formed five groups; each group selected one act. The groups turned their acts into a rap, with the requirements to include all the major characters, settings, and important plot elements  that occur in that act.  They then performed their raps for the class utilizing public speaking techniques such as eye contact, enunciation, voice projection, and other choral reading techniques.
 
After going back to the text to determine characters, setting(s), and analyzing the most important events in their acts, readers again went back and forth to the original text repeatedly, translating Shakespearean English to modern English to rap English and playing with rhyme.
 
Students were so engaged with the activity and the product that they asked teachers in their other classes to release them to attend the performance of my other Humanities class, to listen to their raps.
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There are other students samples of reformulating texts into narrative poems, enhancing summarization skills, in The Write to Read.
 
2. FOUND POETRY
Found poems take words, phrases, and details from existing texts and require readers to modify them, reorder them, and present them as poems, much as one does when creating a collage, resulting in learning and showing understanding in new ways. In the interest of true synthesis and showing one’s learning, I suggest that the found poetry employed in after-reading response writing include some of the reader/writer’s own thoughts about the text. Other decisions of form, such as where to break lines and spacing, are also left to the poet. (Roessing, “Using Found Poetry for Synthesizing Text,” AMLE Magazine)
 
These are my directions:
  • Read through the text.
  • Return to the text and highlight only important words and phrases.
  • Refashion, reorder, and/or reorganize those words, phrases, and details you chose into a poem.
  • Decide on the most effective format. Poetry doesn’t need to rhyme; it can be free verse. Think about line endings or line breaks, formatting, and spacing.
  • Add necessary words and thoughts of your own to make meaning, showing analysis, connections, and inferences you have made.
  • Add a conclusion: the theme (author’s message) or your own understanding, the point you took from the article.
In the AMLE article linked are student samples from English-Language Arts, science, and social studies readers.
 
3. I AM POETRY
In “I Am” poetry, readers write from the perspective of something they have read in a text or textbook. They could be writing from the perspective of a character in a story or poem; a person from a memoir or biography; a scientist or a scientific theory, element, or concept in science class; a person, event, or place in history; a mathematical concept or principle; or a disease, condition, or issue in health.
 
The “I Am” poem follows a format that requires readers to read and analyze how the character, person, item, or event would view its world and its place in the world, returning to the text multiple times to apply what they have learned. This writing also causes readers to synthesize new material with information they already know or new information they may research to create their poem. In the case of items, events, or even places, particularly in social studies, science, math, and health classes, the writer would employ personification (Roessing, “After-Reading Response: I AM Poetry for Synthesizing Text” AMLE Magazine). Writing I Am poetry addresses the reading strategy of inferring.
 
The typical format for an I AM poem is pictured below, but I always advise students that they can substitute their own verbs.
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This is a Gradual Release of Responsibility lesson that I taught in 2nd-4th grade classes:
And here is a student example from a Science class (The Write to Read):
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More examples from middle grade students are included in the AMLE Magazine article linked above.
 
4. POETRY IN TWO VOICES
Comparing and contrasting based on text read is crucial for deeper understanding, and readers need scaffolding to determine important information and organize it. One way of doing so is by writing Poetry in Two Voices. Students can compare two texts or compare elements, such as characters, settings, events, or ideas within a text or they can compare elements within a text to themselves or the world at large. As in all these reformulations, readers are going “back to the book” at a deeper level and interacting with the text.
 
In writing Poetry in Two Voices, details that the two entities have in common are written and read together; differences are written on separate lines, the writer deciding which is to be read first. Hearing two students read two-voice poems aloud is very powerful. The poems can be written in the form of a Venn diagram (first example) or in two columns with the similarities directly across from each other and the differences on different lines (second example). This was a poem I wrote after using a variety of sources to determine the difference in Cajun and Creole cooking while attending a teacher workshp in New Orleans.
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For students of a 4th grade social studies class reading George Washington’s Socks, I helped them brainstorm and gather ideas from the novel with this chart. I reflected the chart on the white board as students helped me brainstorm and add "categories" before they went through the text to write their poems.
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This is a Teacher Model for for a Poem in Two Voices in response to nonfiction texts. After presenting students read an article on kiwi fruits and added a third "voice."
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In “After Reading Response: Poetry in Two Voices to Compare and Contrast" (Roessing, AMLE Magazine), I included examples from a 7th grade English-Language Arts class in which a reader compared/contrasted the two characters in Langston’s Hughes’ short story “Thank You, Ma’am”; 6th grade Social Studies where two students worked together to compare and contrast Cinderella figures from folktales of two cultures; and 8th grade Honors Science in which two students wrote a poem in the voices of convergent and divergent plate boundaries.

5. A-B-C BOOKS OF FACTS
Students individually of in groups create a book of facts either A-Z or spelling out the topic or person about which they read. These  examples were written by a 3rd grade student reading and reflecting on Frederick Douglass with the letters of his name and a secondary student's A-Z response to books and research reading about the rainforest.

PRESENTATIONS
Another way to guide readers back to the text is for readers to prepare presentations for their classmates. There are a variety of presentations; many of these are described in The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension and, for Book Clubs, in Talking Texts: A Teacher’s Guide to Book Clubs across the Curriculum.
 
Some presentations ideas are
  • Talk Show in which a moderator interviews characters and/or experts in the topic
  • Brown-Bag Project—readers prepare bags of items important to characters or by chapter and, as they pull out an item, explain it to the class.
  • Trial or Depositions of Characters
  • Skit/Puppet Show—4 scenes: inciting incident, problem, climax (decision), resolution
  • Newspaper or News Show based on the world of the novel (“Necessary Noise: The Importance of Collaborative Learning”)
  • Cartoon Strip
  • Songs or a Musical
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The primary objective of Before, During, and After-Reading Response is to promote reader interaction with text for better comprehension and deeper understanding. Reader response is a tool for thinking and for unlocking the text.
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The Importance of READER RESPONSE

9/17/2022

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Dear Mom,
This year we have learned a whole new way of responding by journal entries. It really helps you think about what you’re reading, and since it is all on paper you can always go back and think about things you have changed about your reading in the past.  What we usually write about is like a little bit of a summary, not too much though, then we talk about some of the strategies we used and what we were thinking while reading.  I like it a lot because I get to see what I thought before I read the book and then after.
- Hollie  (from
The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension)           
 
Day after day  students sit in front of us, reading books—whole-class, shared texts; book-club novels; or independent, self-selected books.  We look at these readers and wonder, “What are they thinking?”  We can listen in on book clubs, running from meeting to meeting, evaluating those we catch in the act of sharing.  And we can move around the reading workshop, conferring with students one-on-one, sometimes disrupting their reading while trying not to disturb those nearby. But how can we tell if students are interacting with the text and thinking about what they are reading and how can we help them to comprehend better and to read more critically? Teachers need to know if readers comprehend, what they comprehend, and how they comprehend. And we need a way to assess reading to formulate our lessons to grow them as readers.
 
Amidst all the controversy of whether students should have to write anything while, or after, they are reading, I say that it depends on what teachers are having readers write and how they are requiring them to write it. And WHY they are requiring students to write. If readers are required to answer questions on the text; write in formal, edited paragraphs; keep a log (and get parent signatures); or write book reports; I agree that these activities will not increase comprehension and will inhibit the pleasure of reading.
 
However, in my experience and research, I have found Reader Response to be absolutely invaluable for letting teachers see if, what, and how students are reading. Most importantly, Reader Response shows us how a student has read and thought about text, and response allows us to help our students read authentically, interacting with text. Response demonstrates how readers make meaning from what they read and whether they are truly engaged in what they are reading. Students responses serve as formative assessment, informing teachers which lessons—reading strategies and/or literary elements—they need to teach (or re-teach) and to whom: whole-class, small group, or individual reader during Reading Workshop conferences.
 
According to the 2010 Carnegie report "Writing to Read" (and my classroom "research"), students writing about what they read is the most effective strategy to increases comprehension.
 
“The consensus of the research as well as my experience is that the more students read, the better they read.  However, I have found that to a great extent that conclusion depends on the definition of “better.”  I agree that students will read more fluently, but first we have to examine what “reading” is.  Many students think they are reading because they can understand the words and then summarize the plot or, in the case of nonfiction, find the facts.  But teachers need to recognize if their students really comprehend what they are reading.  If not, teachers must distinguish where the breakdown occurs and then identify what they can do to help individual students improve comprehension and assist in taking comprehension to a more profound level.  Many students do not automatically advance to more challenging material or push themselves to think about their reading on different levels.  Students can read without awareness—unconscious of literary devices, inattentive to writer’s craft, lacking insight of comprehension skills they are using—in other words, without interacting with the text.” (The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension)
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WHAT IS READER RESPONSE?
Reader Response, also known as Writing to Learn, is short writings, jottings, or journalings of the readers thoughts and reflections while reading any text—novels, short stories or folk tales, poems, informational articles, textbook chapters, even math word problems.
 
Authentic reading is interactive; in order for students to learn, understand, and remember information, they must act on it. Journaling is a way of manipulating, exploring, challenging, and storing information.  Journaling should be
  • short—I always told readers, after reading for 25 minutes or so, which was our Reading Workshop time, to jot what they are thinking about what they read for 5 minutes
  • spontaneous – Readers can jot thoughts while or after they read.
  • exploratory—Readers may have more questions than answers, especially at the beginning of a text. They are exploring the text and their thoughts about the text at this particular point in time and those thoughts may change as they continue to read.
  • personal – These journalings are what readers notice, what they are thinking, what they want to highlight as interesting and important to them.
  • informal – I tell readers not to worry about revising, editing, or even writing in full sentences; they are to write their thoughts in informal language, much as they think, as long as what they write makes sense to them when re-reading and to me when reading their journals.
  • ungraded – I never assigned grades to response. Students did earn points totaling 100 points for the week. Students, whether reading in class during Reading Workshop or at home for homework (on Writing Workshop days) were to read and write a response in their journals 5 times per week. They handed in their journals once a week, except for our whole-class novel where they handed in journal sheets every day so I knew if they were keeping on track. Of course, whole-class novels were read in Reading workshop so all students had 25 minutes to read in class each day and 5 minutes to write a response. Each response, appropriate for that reader, was worth 20 points. At times I asked them to connect the response to our Reading Focus Lesson, “Sometime in your responses this week, write a reflection of the main character’s traits and how personality affected their actions so far, and mark that response in the margin with CT.” If they had 5 responses and one explored character traits, they received a 100%. If they had 5 responses but did not include a discussion of character traits in one of them, they earned 90% (half credit for one response).
 
To be effective, Reader Response must be taught, modeled, and guided and eventually allow for reader choice. The purpose is to encourage readers to interact with text; the goal is increased comprehension. However, response should always be secondary to reading for pleasure and meaning and, therefore, the reason response is short and informal. Every reader’s 5-minute response will look different; some will be longer and deeper, demonstrating critical thinking; some will be shorter and show less more surface thinking (which will improve during the year). This is differentiation. I had some readers who wrote for much longer than 5 minutes because they wanted to share. They said they felt like they were chatting with me about their text. When some of my more proficient readers and writers wrote just a few lines, I responded, “This is not your 5-minute response. I will expect a bit more next time.” When more reluctant readers and writers wrote more than they had, I celebrated through a note in the journals.
 
Courtney wrote about how her responding changed during the semester: 
I’m responding to what I read about the same amount but a lot deeper. My focus shifted from just taking the reading literally to thinking and analyzing it or making new comparisons to the world. Before, all my comparisons were to myself or other books, and now they relate to the outside world.  A lot of my previous journal entries were questions and I didn’t respond to what I thought the answers were (which I do now). My recent journal entries have a lot more content than my older ones.
 
Reader response journals also prepare readers for text discussion. In whole-class or small-group discussions, students can refer to their journals for points they can make. More reticent students can even read one of their responses as their contribution to a discussion.
 
Reader Response is a timely topic, both because comprehension and adolescent literacy are crucial areas of concern and because response training leads to proficient performance on high-stakes reading and writing tests as students are trained to write critically and to respond to all types of literature, and texts fiction and nonfiction.
 
I taught my student three types of response: BEFORE-READING RESPONSE, DURING-READING RESPONSE and AFTER-READING RESPONSE, all of which are essential to the process of interacting with, and learning from, text.

BEFORE-READING RESPONSE
Before-Reading Response (or Preview Response or, as I refer to it in The Write to Read, Anticipation Response) is crucial to activate prior knowledge, helping readers to make sense of new information and construct meaning from text. Also, Before-Reading Response prompts readers to set personal purposes for reading. Activating prior knowledge and setting a purpose for reading are considered two of the most valuable reading strategies. Another advantage is that Preview Response turns reading into inquiry: What do I know about this? What do I want to know?
 
A Preview Response is a reflection based on previewing or skimming an upcoming text, focusing on text features, such as titles, authors, pictures, illustrations, subtitles, graphics—features that differ based on the text being previewed. Response can be oral or, more effectively, written. In a Preview Response readers make inferences about, and predictions of, what will be read, and such response can be effectively implemented in all disciplines with all texts.

Below is (1) a Teacher Model based on the covers and Introduction of The Glass Castle, (2) Guided Practice with 4th graders getting ready to read George Washington's Sock, and (3) 8th graders preparing to read The Giver.
>Read more about Preview Response, with examples from students reading science, social studies, and math texts, in “Before-Reading Preview Response,” one of my columns for AMLE Magazine and in The Write to Read: Response Journal That Increase Comprehension on which this blog is based.
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DURING-READING RESPONSE
During-Reading Response is response students write while they are reading a text. Effective written responses should be meaningful and compel readers to explore, question, and challenge text and make connections and inferences so they can construct meaning and learn from text. During reading response is short, personal, informal, exploratory, unedited, and ungraded.
 
There are many formats for During-Reading Response. I scaffolded and taught each type, many of which I created for my students, through the first half of the year, based on analyzing what proficient readers do—maybe not on paper, but in their heads and in conversations with other readers. In this way, readers added to their “toolbelts” and towards the goal of deciding how best to respond in their journals based on their preferences and most appropriate for the texts they were reading.
 
An academic team or self-contained teachers can start with one response strategy in ELA, then add social studies, then science, and then math, and health and art, so that students are responding to texts (including visual texts) across the curriculum. I worked with one school where, when I returned to train in After-Reading Response, the music teacher was having students respond to music and the football coach shared that he had players responding to diagrams of plays!
 
I have found that the greatest problem with students’ responses at the beginning of the year is that readers, even my college students, tend to write summaries instead of reflections. After we discuss (respond) to a text orally,  I hand out a list of Response Starters to add to their Reading Journals, and we examine them.  We discuss some of the stems we heard in our class discussion, and students are encouraged to suggest others to add to the list.
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Students began with trying out some of the Response Starters in their responses, moving to the point where they just might choose one to begin their response which moves them away from the habit of summarizing into the response mode. Even our youngest students can read and respond to a wordless text. Visual readers point to the image that they are responding to, orally or in writing. (1) is an example of response to pictures and a Teacher Model based on a chapter of Winn-Dixie which the students had already read.
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> Read more about Response Starters, with examples from students reading a science article and a math word problem in “Reader Response In All Disciplines,” one of my columns for AMLE Magazine and in other content areas in The Write to Read: Response Journal That Increase Comprehension, the book on which the AMLE Magazine columns and this blog is based.
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There are a variety of ways readers can respond during their reading of the texts of all types, all of which help increase text engagement and comprehension. Some I adapted, and some I created, andI scaffolded them—introducing and moving on when students had successfully demonstrated the idea because the point was to give readers the options so they could choose the option that best fitted, which in some cases was a hybrid of strategies.

MARGINAL NOTES
Especially effective with informational text (and with reluctant writers) was a response that I referred to as Marginal Notes for which the teacher, or the class together, assigns logos—simple, easy-to-draw, and easy to remember symbols—to statement readers can make about text:
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\It is most effective to introduce readers to the concept of marginal notes by introducing and employing three logos with a text, such as an article, and when the students are familiar with those three, adding two more and then two more, until they are employing all logos as marginal notes to show their thinking. Students read an article marking a “note” or logo in the margin. Teachers can require a certain number spread out over the article, differentiating for different readers. Besides causing readers to interact with the text as teachers can observe if they walk around during the reading-marginal noting here are many options of what readers can do after they mark a text. Below is my Teacher Model for a lesson on Marginal Notes.
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>In my column on “Marginal Notes” for AMLE Magazine and in The Write to Read, there are a variety of student examples.

DOUBLE-ENTRY JOURNALS
Many teachers are familiar with double-entry journals or dialectical journal journals. I find them especially effective because teachers can see, and students can remember, to what text they responded, thereby making visible the reader's thought processes. The forms I designed included two columns: the left-hand column, labeled “From the Book,” presents the text evidence; the right-hand column, “From my Brain,” shows the reader’s thinking. The teacher can first model from a chapter or text the students have already read, such as my example from Mr. Popper’s Penguins with an elementary class or the poem "Casey at the Bat" with a secondary class.
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I found >In my column on “Double-Entry Journals” for AMLE Magazine are student examples from ELA, social studies, science, and math classes. The Write to Read includes 6 different types of double-entry journals, depending on the Reading Focus Lessons being taught and a plain form for content area classes.

STICKY-NOTE RESPONSES
Many teachers ask students to post sticky notes in their chapters as they read. The problem I found was that small Sticky Notes lead to small (shallow) thinking. This was my solution: After reading and sticking Sticky Notes in book, in class students can choose 3-4 Sticky Notes to place in the squares of a Sticky-Note Double-Entry journal (pictured) on left side; on right side, they further respond to their original response, thereby delving deeper and developing their thinking. In a way, this could be turned into a “triple-entry journal” if a column was inserted on the left for the text responded to.
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VISUAL RESPONSE or DRAWING THROUGH THE TEXT
Responses do not always need to be in words. Proficient readers visualize as they read a text. They use the words from the text, in combination with background knowledge and prior experiences, connections from their lives and other texts, and inferences made, to construct mental images. When readers create images in their minds that reflect or represent the ideas in the text, they comprehend text at deeper levels and they retain more information and understanding.

The most effective way to teach students to visualize is to teach readers to draw images as they read a text as a during-reading response strategy. It is important that readers include the words or phrases to which they are responding. I would even suggest a double-entry journal with lines for the text on the left side and blank spaces for drawings on the right side.

The advantages of drawing as response:
  1. Readers read more slowly and carefully.
  2. When they are choosing what to draw, readers need to read everything and weigh the relative importance of parts of the text. Since readers cannot depict everything, they must distinguish what is significant rather than merely interesting.
  3. Generating an image while reading requires the reader to be actively engaged with the text.
  4. Illustrating promotes looking for meaning in words
The purpose of drawing through the text specifically are twofold:
  1. readers increase comprehension, especially of complex text
  2. teachers can “see” how their readers comprehend text.
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>My Reader Response column "Ideas for Helping Readers Visualize Text to Promote Comprehension at Deeper Levels" includes teacher directions for this response activity.
CONCLUSION
As one can probably tell, I am passionate about employing Reader Response. Year after year, I observed my reluctant readers become real, even ravenous, readers, increasing their comprehension and raising reading levels. At the same time, I noted my proficient readers reading more deeply and critically. All readers had more to contribute to class and small-group literary discussions. Since my readers read more than they ever had before, it was obvious that reponse  journaling did not curtail their new found-love of reading.

A few words from my students:
Stopping every 25 minutes to write allows me to reflect on the character’s actions, make connections, and understand why the author writes the way he does.  I have also been exploring different genres of literature during my reading journals this year.  I have read sports, adventure, mystery, historical fiction, short story collections, and comedy. Not only have reading journals helped me in just my reading comprehension, but it also has improved my writing skills.  Analyzing the author’s style influences my own methods of writing.
        -John (from The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension)
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I have to say I’ve evolved as a reader. I think it’s because reflecting on reading really got me thinking about what I read. Now it was more than just words in a book. It was like entering a different world every time I picked up a book.
         -Carly (from The Write to Read: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension)

Another advantage for me and for my readers is that I never felt the need to quiz or test their reading or comprehension of texts. The evidence was in their journals.
Watch for my next blog, PART 2 AFTER-READING RESPONSE
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CHOOSING BOOKS FOR BOOK CLUB READING

9/7/2022

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Text Clubs have many advantages which I have written about in the introduction to the Book Reviews section. Besides Nonfiction or Informational Book Clubs, Short Story Clubs, Poetry Clubs, Folklore Clubs, Article Clubs, and even Textbook Clubs, all of which are described in Talking Texts: A Teacher’s Guide to Book Clubs across the Curriculum, Novel Book Clubs are the most familiar and can be organized in a variety of ways. These are some suggestions for choosing books for Book Club reading.
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AUTHOR STUDY BOOK CLUBS

As I share in my book Talking Text, my first book club was a matter of necessity. It was 1989 and, other than my mother’s monthly book club, I had not heard of the practice used in the classroom but in my first job which was that of a  11-month permanent substitute, my curriculum guide for Senior Honors stated that I was to teach a Dickens novel. Looking around the classroom I found about 5 copies of one novel. Going to the library, I found a few copies of other Dickens novels. Searching, borrowing, and purchasing, I came up with 5-6 copies of five novels written by Charles Dickens. And so my first Book Club adventure began. I taught background on the author and his times, the students each chose a novel to read, and Author Study Book Clubs were formed. After each group read and discussed their novel, they prepared a creative presentation to the class. In that way, students read one novel but learned about five.
 
Author Study Book Clubs can be structured in a variety of ways. Then teacher can give background on the author or students can individually or later, in book clubs, study different biographical facets of the author, including time period, geography, cultural background, other publications, etc. which they will share with their clubs and later with the class. The class can read a whole-class text written by the author, ideally a short story. Or the Book Clubs can choose books based on teacher book talks and/or looking at the covers and skimming a few pages of each book. [See Talking Texts for more in-depth information on forming book clubs.] As with the Dickens Book Clubs, each book club read and holds 4-5 meetings to discuss their reading and then prepare a presentation to the class in which they include their observations on not only the content by the author’s craft. Books clubs can compare and contrast the author’s writings as a class or in Inter-Book Clubs where one member of each book club meets in a group to compare and contrast and report their findings.
 
How to choose an author? The most effective is to choose authors who have published at least 5 texts. Ideally the author would have published a short story that the class and read together to begin and build on, but that is rarely the case. I find that it is effective to find authors who write in different genres, such as Walter Dean Myers who has published memoir, historical fiction, realistic fiction, “street life” fiction, sports fiction, and romance, as well as collections of short stories (which are good for slower, more emergent readers who may not be able to finish an entire novel in the same time period as their peers.
 
Also it is best to choose an author who has written in a variety of reading levels. More rare but effective would be to choose an author who has written in a variety of formats, such as prose, verse, graphic, and multi-formatted, such as Laurie Halse Anderson who wrote the graphic novel Wonder Woman: Tempest Tossed but her novel Speak was re-written as in graphic form. Or an author such as Jennifer Nielsen who has written historical novels taking place in different time periods.

If you cannot read the titles, look up the author on Goodreads for titles and synopses.
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FORMAT BOOK CLUBS

In Format Book Clubs book club members read books written in the same format, such as verse novels, graphic novels, epistolary novels (or now, novels written through letters, emails, and/or texts) or, gaining in popularity, multi-formatted novels. Format Book Clubs allow teachers to teach focus lessons on the format.



VERSE NOVEL BOOK CLUBS
For example most novels-in-verse are written in free verse, so the teacher can teach that format but also poetic devices such as figurative language of all types. I think the power of free verse is in the line break choices. I always described line breaks as an eye-pause, when reading it is short than a comma but your eye is forced to pause and notice a particular word or phrase. Discussion can be held on why the author chose to break on that word. Stanza length, which usually varies, inspires other reflective conversations.
 
Verse novels are written in most genres, such as historical fiction, memoir, biography, humor, realistic fiction. Some authors only write in verse format; others write in a range of formats. Such novels are written by culturally-diverse authors on diverse topics, featuring diverse characters and settings.

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Many verse novels are written in a variety of poetic forms which lead to lessons or study of the different types of poetic formats. Leslea Newman’s October Mourning: A Song for Matthew Shepard is written as 68 poems about Matthew Shepard and his murder. A range of emotions is shared through a variety of poetic styles: free verse, haiku, pantoum, concrete, rhymed, list, alphabet, villanelle, acrostic, and poems modeled after the poetry of other poets, thereby, not only introducing to the “what” of those formats but the “why.”
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But most importantly, novel-in-verse is a text format which engages readers for divergent reasons:
  1. Reluctant readers, emerging readers, and ELL readers appreciate the less-dense text;
  2. Proficient readers value the lyricism and creative structures, the words;
  3. All readers can appreciate the artistry and the spacing, which is sometimes creatively designed.
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GRAPHIC BOOK CLUBS
It is important that teachers teach visual literacy. Citizens of the world are bombarded with images daily—in the news, as advertising, body language and facial expressions. Reading and studying graphic text allow readers to learn to read visual clues.
 
The advantages of holding Graphic Novel Clubs are that, besides engaging many reluctant readers, artistic students will learn to appreciate the congruity of art and text and the graphics make it possible for our ELL readers to interpret a text.
 
I have not read many graphic novels but teachers/librarians can facilitate Graphic Book Clubs with an assortment of graphic texts as shown or hold Graphic Historical Fiction Book Clubs or Graphic Memoir Book Clubs.
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CULTURAL BOOK CLUBS
Besides advocating for diverse cultures to be represented in Book Club choices, Cultural Book Clubs can be developed around the cultures of the author, characters, or setting. Pictured are some examples. It is vital that readers see their cultures reflecting in stories they read as well as using story as passage into other cultures. This type of Book Club can lead to research into cultures which Clubs will then present to their peers who may be reading novels set in, or featuring characters representing, other cultures.
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GENRE BOOK CLUBS
Genre Book Clubs can facilitate students exploring a genre and to see the variety of topics that can be covered by a genre. When planning a genre study, it is effective to include diverse authors and/or characters and formats—not only prose, but verse, graphic, and/or multi-formatted. Genre Book Clubs can be created around Historical Fiction, Sports Fiction, Memoir, Mystery, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Dystopian, Magical Realism, etc.
 
Historical Fiction novels can be read and discussed in Social Studies/History classes or in ELA/English classes or as part of  interdisciplinary units in both. One suggestion is that in a Social Studies class, each Historical Fiction Book Club reads a novel from a different time or place that will be covered in the curriculum that year, and, when that time/place is being covered in class, the Book Club makes their presentation to the class or all Book Clubs present at the end of the year as a review.

STEM BOOK CLUBS
Not really considered a genre are Disciplinary Book Clubs—math, social studies, science, health, art, music. The novels pictured include science and math connections and can be read in those two classes or in ELA or English classes with collaborative interdisciplinary lessons. Some of them, such as Fever 1793, can be employed across the curriculum.

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THEMATIC BOOK CLUBS
The most obvious organization for Book Clubs is Thematic or Topic Book Clubs and most of what I share in Facebook posts and in the Book Reviews sub-sections of this site are Thematic Book Clubs, such as those posted under the Book Review section: Teen Justice & Change Seekers and Surviving Loss.
 
Other topics or themes around which I have planned Book Club reading are
  • Identity & Self-Discovery
  • Family Relationships; Fathers; Grandparents; Siblings
  • Physical Challenges
  • Mental Health and Neurodiversity
  • Bullying and Acts of Kindness
  • Love & Friendship
  • Immigrant & Refugee Experience
  • Japanese Internment
  • Poverty & Homelessness
  • PRIDE Novels
  • Reading Across America
  • Road Trips
  • Novels of Summer
  • Winter Holidays

MONTHLY BOOK CLUB TOPICS
I wrote a guest-blog for the Western Pennsylvania Council for Teachers of English (WPCTE) on monthly Book Club topics that are based on National and International Days and Holidays, “2022 MG/YA Book Recommendations Month-by-Month.” Part 2 of that blog includes a link to Part 1.

These suggestions for ways to choose books for Book Club reading gives the readers a commonality that they can discuss across the Clubs and across the class. When Book Clubs have something—characters, format, genre, topic—they can compare and contrast, one student from each Book Club can meet together, conducting discussions in these Inter-Club meetings, giving even more meaning to the reading.

See these ideas described, developed, and extended and even more Book Club ideas and strategies in Talking Texts: A Teacher’s Guide to Book Clubs across the Curriculum.      
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Teaching through the GRADUAL RELEASE OF RESPONSIBILITY Model

8/28/2022

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What is Gradual Release of Responsibility?
The gradual release of responsibility model of instruction provides the structure for work to move deliberately  and purposefully from teacher modeling (Explicit Instruction) to joint responsibility between teachers and learners (Guided Practice), to independent practice and application by the learner. 
After I learned to teach through the GRR Model, I taught every Daily Focus Lesson—for Reading and for Writing—in that format.

What Is a Daily Focus Lesson?
  • derived from needs of students
  • simple and direct
  • 10-15 minutes
  • involves a teacher demonstration,
  • a student practice, and
  • an invitation to apply in real situation during the Independent Reading/Writing part of Workshop

What are the components of a Daily Focus Lesson?
  1. Connection and rationale
  2. Explicit instruction/Teacher model (“I Do”)
  3. Guided practice (“We Do”)
  4. Independent application (“You Do”)
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How to Choose Daily Focus Lessons
Since this blog concentrates more on READING as an example, I will explain my process for choosing Daily Focus Lessons for Reading Workshop (which follows a similar process for Writing lessons).
1. I make a list of what reading strategies and elements I want students to know by the end of the year.
2. After meeting my students and getting to know their strengths and weaknesses during the year, I cross off what they already know (which may be different from what they were “taught”).
3. I break lessons down into their smallest components:
  • Example: Instead of plot, I teach individual focus lessons on inciting incident, conflict (one lesson on each type of conflict), climax (or decision), resolution, and denouement.
  • Example: I teach character traits, characterization—direct and indirect, static and dynamic, round and flat characters, character motivation, etc.—as separate lessons.
  • Example: Instead of rhyme, I teach the different types of rhyme—end rhyme, internal rhyme, slant rhyme, rhyme scheme—in different lessons.
4. I plan the year and match lessons with type of each reading (whole-class, book club, or independent self-selected) and with text formats and genres).
5. I teach each lesson as many times as needed for mastery, using different read-aloud mentor texts and different Guided Practice activities.
Note: In a small collaborative school, teachers can plan Focus Lessons vertically.
 
Remember, teachers can teach about 150 Focus lessons/year (including Reading and Writing), and students are in school for 12 years. You don’t need to teach it all. Teach less to MASTERY.
 
My Reading Focus Lessons list pictured is only a sample list. Some lessons students will already know; some they may be learning in other grades. My Procedural and Reader Response lessons (and more) with Teacher Models and Student Samples are included in THE WRITE TO READ: Response Journals that Increase Comprehension.

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This is a sample GRR Focus Lesson on the Reading Strategy "Making Predicitons" using the poem "Casey at the Bat":
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Using Gradual-Release-of-Responsibility Model to Plan the Year
In fact, I planned my entire year in a Gradual-Release-of-Resposibility model, moving from teacher-directed to student responsibility, from the more familiar to the less familiar, more complex reading and writing, moving from narrative to memoir to informational to argument, or, in lower grades, opinion).  
The last part of the year students put it all together (as we do in real life) with independent, self-selected reading and writing where they independently applied what they had learned to self-selected reading and writing (continuing with Daily Focus Lessons). At times I assigned a class-wide format or topic. This is giving our students the tools and then having them decide when, where, and how to use them—a real-world skill.

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For example, I began my year with whole-class reading—first reading short stories to teach or review literary elements and to teach or review reading strategies. Some of the stories I read; some we read as Readers’ Theater with students volunteering for “parts” as characters—I read the narration; and some I began reading as the Teacher Model (or Explicit Instruction) of my Focus Lesson and students continued reading individually or in pairs for the Guided Practice, and then finished reading independently as the Independent Application of the Lesson. 
 
We then put all the lessons together, reviewing or adding in complexity with Daily Focus Lessons in our one whole-class novel. This was a novel that I chose that I all students could read, some with a little support from the class discussions and me and that I hoped most would enjoy. I suggest a novel that has both male and female protagonists to capture whole-class interest and that is recently-publish so it is likely not to have been read.
 
Next we move to reading in Book Clubs, which is small-group collaborative reading. See my Facebook and future blogs on Book Clubs Reading. And finally to independent, self-selected reading. For more information on this process and Reading Workshop, read “Losing the Fear of Sharing Control” (Middle Grades Journal).
  
Writing follows the same process, moving from whole-class to small-group to independent, supported by Daily Focus Lessons which I will address in depth in future blogs.
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